This is Georgio Cipriano he is a 40 year old mobster from Italy that is trying to be incognito because he doesn't want to be caught by the police. He is all around New York on the reward and wanted posters. If the police caught him he would be facing charges for 10 cases of homicide 6 cases of theft and 6 cases of drug smuggling. Tonight is going to an underground club tonight to get the illegal drugs and women wanted by the head of his mob. The club owners owe the mob 120,000,000 dollars and if they don't get it by tonight the owners will be robbed and all they will be tortured and slaughered to death. He is kinda nervous about this hit tonight because he knows that they have great security.
1 comment:
hey mya,
i liked your story, it was cute and clever. just watch out for small grammatical errors and commas and staying a little more formal.
otherwise, good character development :]
love you!!!!!
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